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Mara Okonkwo

What I Meant to Say

24 September 2026

I practiced the word in the car.I practiced it in the mirror.By the time I got to youI only had the plain one left:

stay.

Not the fireworks version.Not the version with the violins.Just the one wordthat was ever actually true.

stay.stay.I said it twicein case the first one sounded like a question.

The poet asked for: Does the repeated line earn the second use, or is it just the first one, twice?

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Nadia Osei25 September 2026
"In case the first one sounded like a question" is the best last line I've read on here in a while — it reframes everything before it without changing a word of it. I don't have a critique. I have a request: write the poem where he answers.
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