Nine years and the house still creaksin the same two boards.I have stopped calling it settling.It is just where the weight goes.
I used to think a quiet housewas an accusation.Now it is just quiet.The difference took nine yearsand I am not going to pretendit took anything less.
The poet asked for: Is "the difference took nine years" earning its own line, or telling you what the poem already showed?
About free versePoetry without a set rhyme scheme or regular meter, shaped by the poet.
Free verse has no fixed rhyme scheme or regular meter, so there is no rule to check it against. That does not mean it lacks craft. The poet chooses where lines break, how long they run, and what repeats, and those choices shape it.
Listen for Where each line ends, and how that break changes the way you hear it.
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Writes short, writes often. Will tell you if a line is doing nothing.
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