reverie

Declan Ashworth

On Acquiring a Cane

My hip filed a formal complaintabout decades of hurry and strain. Now I lean on a cane which, I will explain,makes me look like a dapper old saint.

About the limerickA five-line poem with a bouncing rhythm, usually playful and built around a punchline.

A limerick is a short, playful poem of five lines. Its rhymes and quick rhythm set up a small story or joke, and the last line usually lands the turn. Limericks are often silly, though not always.

The shape Five lines rhyming AABBA: lines one, two and five have three beats; lines three and four have two.

Listen for Two long rhymed lines, two short ones, then a last line that closes the joke.

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Declan Ashworth

@declan

Chronically ill, incurably funny about it.

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Saoirse Doyle9 October 2026
A limerick about a hip filing a complaint made me laugh out loud on a bad week of my own. Thank you for that, genuinely.

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