in a room of just usin a hallway flooded with peoplein a universe filled with trillionsyou'll always be my first choiceno matter whereno matter wheni truly mean iti know words don't mean much to youbut when i prove it to youyou'll rememberthat you'll always be the light of my life
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About free versePoetry without a set rhyme scheme or regular meter, shaped by the poet.
Free verse has no fixed rhyme scheme or regular meter, so there is no rule to check it against. That does not mean it lacks craft. The poet chooses where lines break, how long they run, and what repeats, and those choices shape it.
Listen for Where each line ends, and how that break changes the way you hear it.
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