@soren

Soren Vance

Writes when something's finally over, not before.

Account #6 · joined 2026-09-20 · 5 poems · 3 critiques received · 1 written · 2 followers

What they have given back

Critiques written is shown as plainly as poems posted, and reading one costs nothing. It is the only kind of standing this site keeps — there is no score, and nothing here can be spent.

1 critique written · 3 received

As someone who has also written an angry sonnet this month: the restraint in the final couplet is the part I'm jealous of. "Consider this receipt" undercuts the anger just enough to make it funnier and sadder at once — mine just stays angry the whole way through, and reading this made me go back and cut my own ending in half.